Tuesday, January 1, 2002

超寫學 Super Writing System: 部份學員回饋

一直以來,認為自己算是詞能達意,情理兼備。

然而有時,尤其需要撰寫有關宣傳、推廣的文稿時,總是覺得抓不住重點,令讀者立即行動。

上了超寫學四堂課程之後,我發現我忽略了最重要的一點,就是如何直達目的。措詞如何優美,如果不能打動人心,也是徒然。

憑藉課程上的知識,自信更能寫得更多,寫得更好。

Iris Seto


超寫學課程,並非一般提升寫作能力課堂,除了學會如何精鍊書寫技巧,也是一個學習如何說服人、打動人的思維訓練。

寫什麼?如何寫?為何寫?一切就是關於你怎樣想。一個高質素的思維訓練,以具體的學習程序,言之有物配合書寫秘訣,文筆自然鋒利又能動人。

Molly Yeung


作家推薦之課程,果真非同凡響。能有系統化地提升筆鋒,馬上立竿見影。高階超寫學之來臨,確有萬眾期待之勢。

湯偉成


很高興能在你的 Super Writing System 1 中學習,在這課程中使我領略到寫作的核心原理,更加能學習到如何改進目前的情況。

陶博士活潑生動的表達,例子輕鬆幽默生活化,使人加深學習記憶。很感謝你的用心指導。

Bertha Lo


As the name suggests, the course is really “super” in terms of variety of writing skills and the effectiveness of those skills. Though there were so many different skills taught, they were presented in a systematic, concise and lucid way.

Concepts such as drafting and coping good pieces of classic passages were emphasized and re-emphasized their importance in relation to persuasive good writing. It is not a literature course, but just as significant to writing skill development.

Cliff Chan


超級寫作系統是一個需要練習的課程,讓學員有先後次序地改進自己的文筆,從而吸引讀者繼續追隨,達致說服的成果。

謝謝導師將自己多年的寫作經驗,濃縮成一個簡短的課程,使大家易於明白和運用。

Cheng Ling Kuen


The ideas of the non-stop writing draft help me a lot, thanks!

Esther Ng


My feedbacks on SWS:

1. Guided step by step; Super Writing System makes me feel writing is no more difficult than Ithought.

2. Demonstrate with exercises; teaches me to structure my writing in a persuasive way.

3. Practice day by day; shows me the ways to be a Guru writer.

Olivia Wong


超寫學的得著:上完SWS,改變了很多舊的想法,多了很多對寫作的觀點:

1. 例如草稿再草稿

2. 寫作時自己的立場和讀者的立場,有那幾方面可以考慮

3. Hedline 同 P.S

特別是極速寫作程序和注意點寫作程序,學懂以上兩個程序,見到寫作的流暢度及表達技巧有即時的提升。

Mak Ting Fai


Super Writing System is significant, practical and far-reaching change to people who have studied it. Furthermore, thank you very much for teaching step by step and in micro and macro aspects.

Celeste


Super Writing System: You gave sound and practical advice to me. They are often very important.

Ng Wai Chun


超寫學是個破格、創新的課程,我學到了意想不到的寫作方法,應用到日常寫作中。

Jan Ng


The SWS handout provides us with a clear and simple format for our ease of understanding and learning.

The exercises held in class enable us to progressively and fully understand the writing techniques.

The systemic writing skills would fully benefit us in writing articles with more confidence in conveying our message to our target readers.

The lessons prompt us to resorting the use of our persuasion skills under systematic thinking in achieving our goal.

Again, I thank you very much for giving us more information to our study.

Chow Suk Kuen


上完整個SWS Level 1之後,我發覺整個SWS能夠幫助「寫手」更全面地了解他/她要寫出的文章。

思考得全面,才能知道自己要、想寫什麼。另外,我亦察覺自己寫作時,有更多的層面需要考慮。謝謝!

Albert Lo


完成SWS後, 令眼界大開,整個課程包羅萬有,一針見血,想增加的寫作能力的學員,即時獲益, 當中:

1) 令學員迅速掌握到寫作技巧

2) 只需僅記程序,更能容易運用

3) 課堂的練習,令對所學有初步的体驗

4) 豐富內容,同時具体地將精要表達出來

5) 既能深入分析,了解透徹每個寫作技巧

備註: 一生受用的課程, 熱切其待SWS2

Eric Au


課程實用又易用!文字的根基實非一朝一夕可以建立。短時間內改善寫作對一般人來說十分困難。是次課程教授的超級寫作系統及程序,從另一個層面提昇寫作技巧,理論簡潔易明之餘亦快速見效。值得推薦。

Ada Chow


Thank you again for providing this practical and useful writing course (Super Writing System) to us. I would like to share the below good thing about the course:

- A systemic approach for writing
- different skills can be linked together
- Sharing of useful and free online resources
- Lots of practices for us to understand the skills more
- Integrate writing skills with thinking logic

Kenny Tang


超級寫作系統:多謝教導,從你的教導中得益良多。專心的參考你所有課程的宣傳單張,真的了解更多,多謝。

Anita Cheung


超級寫作系統是一個不可多得的學習寫作課程,多謝陶博士讓我克服了對寫作的恐慌感,陶博士他不單止將寫作化為簡單的規律,更能教曉我們配合特定的思考程序及方法,讓我在短短數星期內提升我的文字能力,原來我也能做得到的。

Paul Chan


一直以來,認為自己算是詞能達意,情理兼備。然而有時,尤其需要撰寫有關宣傳、推廣的文稿時,總是覺得抓不住重點,令讀者立即行動。

上了超寫學四堂課程之後,我發現我忽略了最重要的一點,就是如何直達目的。措詞如何優美,如果不能打動人心,也是徒然。

憑藉課程上的知識,自信更能寫得更多,寫得更好。

Iris Seto


在這個超寫學課程,你別妄想可以安然靜坐接收資訊,你要動腦筋思考﹑要動手練習﹑要動口互相評論,參與課程的每位同學都忙得很!

然而這樣的互動,讓大家執筆時變得舉重若輕,逐漸掌握各種寫作的法寶,輕易勾畫出一篇篇打動人心的文章。

Mak Yin Ping


超寫學:非一般寫作技巧課程,讓你脫離死板寫作方法、突破舊有寫作模式、打開全新寫作角度,更讓你開拓寫作思維的領域。

KF Tung


Your courses, esp SWS always are succinct. To the point!

And very very and really really useful and practical.Highly stimulating!

Paul Chan


Writing is part of my everyday life but I have never thought of the ways to get readers to take action. SWS course is such a course that brings me skills and insights in this respect.

To me, this is thebest writing course I have ever taken.

Eric Wang


Actually , I do not expect that I would have drastic improvement in my writing skill though it is my intention to attend the course. After completing the course last night, I feel that I have obtained much more benefits than expected.

It is really an eyeopening experience . I just cannot imagine that there are so many skills available to assist me to convey ideas to others by words and to persuade them to accept my ideas .

I am grateful for your organising such class for us.

Leung Kit Fun


超級寫作系統超過我最初的諗法:這個課程只是教寫作而己。

這個課程不單教寫作,還教我點做人:

1. 多些注意/思考讀者(每一個人)的反應/感受

2. 要堅持到底才會成功

3. 多思考用不同的方法使自己所寫的更好我開始明白:「知」只是知道,「識」才有生產力是什麼意思。

『超寫學』這個名字很好,這個課程是超越了寫作的框框,課程的內容很活靈活現地呈現出來,最棈彩的是:你和同學們的對話,這可以說明:如果寫得好,『講』都是同一道理。

Doro Wong


從未想過寫作會有什麼方程式,並且那麼多及有效果!

最初報讀這個超寫學課程只是想改進自己的寫作技巧,但在你有計算,有系統的引導下,思維能力自然而然被提升了,因為想得到才能寫得好,言之有物,才能打動人!

Keith, 多謝你和非常佩服你的“消化”能力!

Susan Chan


SWS is a fruitful course. Your presentation is clear and I enjoy it.

Elsa Wong
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